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Poems loads of themnah maybe it is just one xD

Started by Strayavat, Dec 21 2009 05:06 PM

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#1 Strayavat

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Posted 21 December 2009 - 05:06 PM

Well People i hope i can post in here some of my poes i write most of them in english so...xD


here is just a small poem by me one that made me proud! xD

It was not god
It was love
Love created us all
Because for one to exist
Two equals had to fall
Each one had to inhale
And trough their love they breed
Trough their love they did not fail
They made the perfect seed


i'll post regularly!
It Was Not God
It Was Love
Love crated Us All
Because for one to exist
two equalls had to fall
by me!

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Posted 06 January 2010 - 11:12 PM

Nice, espeicially as english is'nt you first language. :D I like it.

Also I'm not to sure if it was just a typo but when you write 'trough' I think you mean 'through' but your English is alot better than my Portugese. :P
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Posted 07 January 2010 - 02:56 PM

I also think it's two equal, not two equals, but let's see what native speakers think.
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Posted 25 May 2010 - 07:47 AM

"Equals" is right
And "Through" is right

A nice poem! :thumbsupsmileyanim: Going to post anymore? :happystar:
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