My Writing
#1
Posted 06 March 2009 - 02:07 AM
So many songs sing the keys of life, listen.
In comes the light, sending a surge on through.
Tell me, when does it feel right. My love.
When does it speak in words we know? Cryptic.
And if there’s more to life than what we see,
why does the ocean seem so unknown? Fear.
Clinging to my own, gonna find my way,
darling come on in. Let’s feel our music.
I don’t mind the edge, as long as you can feel me.
Streaming. Can we cross the road to somewhere,
wherever that is. Come sit by the tree awhile. Thinking.
Life doesn’t have a reason, unless you give it one.
Reverse psychology. Captivate the way I feel,
Through my expression.
I hear the sounds from all around,
They give me so many inspirations that scream.
Attention please. Just let the music flow from your soul.
So let me say life comes in all shades, but when does it….
#2 Guest_nowordsysyworld_*
Posted 06 March 2009 - 05:02 PM
jay!
#3
Posted 07 March 2009 - 12:24 AM
ilove the whole feel
it aboslutliy wonderful {sorry for the speeling}
#4
Posted 09 March 2009 - 06:16 PM
This piece are lyrics that I will put with a guitar piece I did. Not very good at it yet, as mostly I was playing with the sounds (that try to play what you hear inside, feel), rather than focusing on the notes. And the recording wasn't very good. One of these days I will work to put them together in song. It takes time, patience and practice to get there, but that is a good things bcuz that is how we learn, so worth it. And I just want to share it mainly, to be able to play those sounds and music I hear, because I love music that way.
Anyways, thanks again. Have a wonderful day.
#5
Posted 02 April 2009 - 06:24 PM
Let the psychedelic funk rock illuminate your soul.
Feel the positive high energy orb around the atmosphere of your being.
Allow it to connect its roots within the stem of your brain
and let it morph through your veins.
Encounter everthing that it is, can you feel the erotic sensation
move your peripheral nerves.
Get up and move, let it soothe your mood in twilight hours.
Reflect its grooves deep into the sun,
where record breaking sounds transmit frequencies unbound.
In rythmn, in time bring forth your primitive requisite.
Capture the keynotes ringing out like hues of the northern lights.
Take hold, as unison collides.
#6 Guest_nowordsysyworld_*
Posted 02 April 2009 - 11:11 PM
keep 'em comin'
also song ?
#8
Posted 07 April 2009 - 09:55 PM
For what am I, but a piece of nothing
floating through the atmosphere.
Life is full of so many things,
but what is it that holds us back?
Is it fear, fear of rejection?
Is it fear, fear of adventure?
Fear, has so many forms
that breathe through us.
Love is to life, as life is to love.
For who am I to question
the life before me.
For who am I to question
the life after me.
For who am I, but one to follow
my inner tuition and seek advice
from my heart.
For what am I to defend,
if my reasons are not accepted
as justified.
For what am I,
when it feels as though anything I do
can't seem to make you happy,
happy to feel the love I give.
For what am I, but a piece of dust
where my existence doesn't belong.
For what am I, am I but a reflection
inside the sun and moon.....
#9 Guest_nowordsysyworld_*
Posted 07 April 2009 - 10:20 PM
thanks
more !
#11 Guest_nowordsysyworld_*
Posted 17 April 2009 - 09:41 PM
all the positive smiley faces in a row.
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perhaps you could lower ( /soften ) the contrast on the difference clouds ?
it's a matter of taste(s)
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that's right, they're called emo tick cons
#12
Posted 17 April 2009 - 10:13 PM
And as for softening it, I am going to try adjust it later. It's like in photoshop when you render the difference clouds, it doesn't give you the option of tone/contrast, so gonna have to play around a bit. The sand/water background is an actual photo I took and complimented my writing piece.
#13 Guest_nowordsysyworld_*
Posted 17 April 2009 - 10:18 PM
I'm nifty at it. if it doesn't work/u want i can try, doesn't take me long.
i like the 'sand/water'
maybe you should team up with WilletFillet ( also in this forum )
Guess i'm just kinda' seeing stuff in my head.
#14
Posted 18 April 2009 - 12:05 AM
nowordsysyworld, on Apr 17 2009, 02:18 PM, said:
I'm nifty at it. if it doesn't work/u want i can try, doesn't take me long.
i like the 'sand/water'
maybe you should team up with WilletFillet ( also in this forum )
Guess i'm just kinda' seeing stuff in my head.
Interestingly, I used microsoft word for those, lol. I was playing around with the text fonts and decided to add the text box w/one of my pics as the background just for fun. I will work with it in photoshop next week, so will see.
I LOVE the Ocean.
Don't know WilletFillet, but will go check it out.
Well, you're not alone with seeing stuff in your head, we all get to seeing things in our heads which is why we come up or out with these creations that we do, right?
You don't have to use adobe, as there are many other programs out there. I use many different ones, from Photoshop, Corel, Paint Pro, Artrage, Ultimate Paint, MS Paint and others (when I want to work with digital stuff)...then play around with the effects and stuff, yeah I could spend hours with that. But I also like to draw, paint and crafts....although I need some more practice or getting better at drawing portraits and more details so that I can draw out the 3D/realism feel more, sometimes mine come out more of a folk style to some degree and not what I intended, like this one: (I sketched it, then hand painted it with acrylic paints.)
#15 Guest_nowordsysyworld_*
Posted 18 April 2009 - 12:22 AM
if u won't, i will
#16
Posted 24 April 2009 - 06:14 PM
Here's a little somethings I created:
I have them bigger, but wanted to be respectful for other viewers (please let me know if they don't work).

#17
Posted 30 April 2009 - 06:31 PM
This was inspired while listening to "Down in a Hole by Alice in Chains" and "Today by Smashing Pumpkins." When someone special dies, that you allow their heart to live through you and to keep close those special memories and friendship. peace/luv
I will sleep no more, my feelings revealed.
My heart, my soul have raised no fool.
Just know, how much I love you.
Candles burn at the honor of my life.
Don't be sad now, my heart lives through you.
So carry on, let my music move like frequencies in space.
My passions burn with truth
and I can't hide all the pains.
But I know someday there will come
an understanding
that will bring a sense of peace
and you will see me smile.
Beyond our days, we have a place
where we can be so free.
Don't you know the centuries move with time,
just as our souls are passed on from
generation to generation.
As I look on, I see so many things passing by.
Don't let the greatest things slip through the cracks.
You know you're born to be the person you've become.
Don't let them tear your heart out.
Stand up and be proud of your accomplishments.
Don't look back, just grow stronger day by day.
#18
Posted 19 May 2009 - 11:18 PM
I'm going down, down this dusty road.
And they say it don't matter
where you've been, only where you're going.
I've got to put my head on strong,
so time doesn't eat me away.
And this is what I say.
*chorus*
Don't know where this hollow road will lead me,
but I know I must fight to stay alive.
So as long as you can find a way to be happy,
that's all that matters to me.
Gonna let my love go to the sea,
because maybe it don't belong to me.
Just when I feel like fading, I listen to the music
and it takes me to a special place.
Can you feel my heart shake,
when your love went astray.
I wish I knew what to say,
but my heart feels shattered in place.
**pick up speed/rythmn**
Tell me do you think I step out to be broken.
You know I lose my trust with each and every time.
My heart can't take the pain,
when all I wanted was to love this time.
When life feels empty, it can make you feel estranged.
In times we try, can't you feel the fire burning.
Don't be surprised, how life can be re-arranged.
Sometimes, sometimes it's what we've got to do.
Now don't be afraid, when you feel me by your side.
Your side, that's what I feel inside.
Tell me what's on your mind,
you know I don't want to be unkind.
No time to defray,
my threads grow stronger everyday, everyday.
I'm beginning to find myself along the way,
you know I want to find my way.
(Outro)
I'm walking down the hollow road,
but I know in time I will find my way.
Don't be afraid, Don't be afraid.
I want you by my side,
your love's deep inside my heart.
We'll stray from the hollow road,
to walk along our own path.
Notes: Slow Accoustic Guitar start, then
before the 3rd verse (tell me), pick up the
speed/rythmn with Electric Guitar.
--this is running in my head, mind you,
haven't played it with my guitar yet, but
maybe in time I can get it down.....but for
now, I need to get this song out.
#19
Posted 23 May 2009 - 01:18 AM
#20
Posted 29 May 2009 - 08:19 PM
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Deep Inside
My only alcohol is life.
As we breathe in the toxic fumes or
poisons of destruction,
we can learn to breathe out the more
positive outcomes that come from
a passionate place of our inner self.
The Inner Peace of our being.
No matter right or wrong,
no matter the chemical imbalance,
we can learn how to find our own
balance amongst it all.
The balance of the "y's" are
what you feel that balance you.
Only you define what those lines are
and how they intertwine.
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That which brings me to life,
comes from the Love I have for me
and the Love I have for you.
Sensual feelings that arouses the heart
and sends the adrenaline fluids rushing
through our bodies forms.
Sensual pleasure comes from
the place of physical touch.
Like the sense of warmth and
fulfillment which comes from
the place of reaching that comfort zone,
how everything will feel right in place
right on time.
Whether it be fast, whether it be slow,
whether it be big or small,
it's what makes you glow inside,
like how the florescent glow worm
lights up the night.
Come morning light, will shine
the brightest hues you will ever see.
A Love that covers your beings
in the silent air.
Snuggling close, watching as the sun
rises from the east until it sets to the west.
Sensual sensations that send you into an
erotic zone, none like you've never known.
And on that day, you will know deep inside...
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